Compunere Trandafirul ofilit

Posted in Compuneri on Apr 18, 2010

Era o zi de toamna . Soarele isi prelingea culorile palide pe cerul plumburiu . Ploua cu cristale mici, mici care detineau deja de o ora tot cerul si pamantul.Trandafirul , floarea iubirii ,se lasa spalata incontinu de lacrimile cerului.Si incet, ,incet isi lasa caputul cel firav sa cada lin pe tarana neagra .Am mers la floarea ofilita luandu-I petalele ruginii in mana dreapta si am inceput sa le las sa zboare impreuna cu vantul in departari .

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Compunere trimisa de Goja Andreea.

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15 Responses to “ Compunere Trandafirul ofilit ”

  1. #1 Cocu Says:
    November 23rd, 2010 at 12:01 pm

    10 cu felicitari sooooooper sooooper 100000000000000000000000000 100000000000000000000001000000000000000000000
    imi place foarte tare e foarte frumos

  2. #2 nuuuuuuujjj Says:
    December 10th, 2010 at 9:04 am

    :-??

  3. #3 nelutu Says:
    April 27th, 2011 at 7:35 am

    fff fruomasa

  4. #4 V.ali Says:
    November 2nd, 2011 at 4:49 am

    100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

  5. #5 ady Says:
    November 25th, 2011 at 1:04 am

    bvooooo…

  6. #6 lisa Says:
    May 9th, 2012 at 3:17 am

    pt compunerea asta am luat 10+

  7. #7 nicol Says:
    October 17th, 2012 at 5:29 pm

    mai mare nu puteai so faci

  8. #8 ionut Says:
    December 3rd, 2012 at 4:08 pm

    scura dar meobisnuita!!!@@ 🙂 🙁 😀 :(evil)

  9. #9 Anonymous Says:
    October 20th, 2013 at 9:27 am

    forte trumooasa….puteai sa o continui 🙂

  10. #10 myryDyaS Says:
    November 25th, 2013 at 9:36 pm

    Este foarte frumoasa dar puteai sa o faci si mai luna putin …ca poate tu ai facut-o si ai talent la compus… !!!!!!!! 😉 😉 😉 <3

  11. #11 MyRyDyAs Says:
    November 25th, 2013 at 9:40 pm

    mie una mia placut …dar trebuia sa o faci putin mai lunga ,ca sa fie o compunere…. “:* :* :* :* :* :* :* :*;) 😉 =))

  12. #12 serban Says:
    January 19th, 2014 at 2:56 pm

    foarte tare dar prea scurta

  13. #13 Anonymous Says:
    March 29th, 2014 at 3:13 pm

    eu sint Andreea Frunze am scris o compunere si am luat 10 cu plus

  14. #14 denis Says:
    April 10th, 2014 at 5:13 pm

    n-aaaaare nimic cu trandafirul sie foarte scurta (facepalm)

  15. #15 anghelush Says:
    November 3rd, 2014 at 7:26 pm

    foarte minunata

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